Well done Maia you have written a good argument sharing your opinion. You have included an opinion, detail, connectives and used evidence to back up you opinion. Good work.
Next time you need to show more control when using capital letters and full stops. You also need to include more emotive language.
Well done Maia you have written a good argument sharing your opinion. You have included an opinion, detail, connectives and used evidence to back up you opinion. Good work.
ReplyDeleteNext time you need to show more control when using capital letters and full stops. You also need to include more emotive language.