Wednesday 19 November 2014

Geometry.


Geometry day 2

W.A.L.A: Geometry 



This is a Equailateral triangle because they are all equal sides. 




This is an Isosceles because there are only two equal sides. 


And this is a scalene because it has no equal sides. 

Thursday 13 November 2014

What is an adverbial and adjectival phrase?

Made up storey. 

Purple-how much
Green-where 
Blue-when
Yellow-why

Wednesday 12 November 2014

Writing Recraft Camp writing

W.A.L.T: use adjective & adverbial phrases. 






It was finaly our groups turn. Our group was the last group to do it. Two sleepless nights waiting for this day to come. This was going to be the best day ever.  James caled as over "group J and I, time to go".  With no time to lose I put my shoes & socks on got my rain jacket & torch then we hoped in the car and within a couple on seconds we were of. I was thinking about all of the people that have came back of from caving talking about incredible it was and how small the some spaces were. I was so excited but I had fear running up and down my spine. We got there. James gave as some instructions on how to get to the cave. We had to find swamp a old tree over 100 years old and then we will find the cave. We got a few instructions before we entered the dark deep cave. I took my first couple steps into the cave then knew it was going to be awesome. As I was walking there was a water fall. We sore huge crayfish and small ones proberly as just smaller then a pencial. Georgia shined her torch at a spot in the cave and out  came about 4 or 5 wetas the size of your hand. They were gross. As we got closer to the end of the cave we sore some glow worms. They were pretty. Glow worms are things that hang. We mde it to the end. James said "who wants to crawl through the small space. I did it. I had to go down on my tummy. It was averagely hard. Once we were out of the small bit we went back with our torches of. It was pitch black. We were out. Zara, Georgia and I went back in all alone with no adult to show us the way. We went in a line. Then Thomas, Maraki and jaiden came in to save when we didn't need saving. Then Thomas said " you wasted half of our life".  When we got out of the cave we had a biscuit and some photos. You should have seen how dirty we all were!!!



 



It was finaly our groups turn. Our group was the last group to do it. Two nights waiting for this day to come. James caled as over "group J and I, time to go". We hoped in the car. I was thinking about all of the people that have came back of from caving talking about cool it was and how small the spaces were. I was so excited but I had fear running up my spine. We got there. James gave as some instructions on how to get to the cave. We had to find swamp a old tree over 100 and then we will find the cave. We got a few instructions before we entered the dark deep cave. I took my first step in the cave. As I was walking there was a water fall. We sore huge crayfish and small ones proberly as just smaller then a pencial. Georgia shined her torch at a spot in the cameand about 4 or 5 wetas the size of your hand came out. They were gross. As we got closer to the end of the cave we sore some glow worms. They were pretty. Glow worms are things that hang. We mde it to the end. James said "who wants to crawl through the small space. I did it. I had to go down on my tummy. It was hard. Once we were out of the small bit we went back with our torches of. It was pitch black. We were out. Zara, Georgia and I went back in. We went in a line. Then Thomas, Maraki and jaiden came in to save when we didn't need saving. Then Thomas said " you wasted half of our life".  When we got out of the cave we had a biscuit and some photos. You should have seen how dirty we all were!!!

Tuesday 11 November 2014

Writing Recraft Going To Perth

W.A.L.T:  Use adverbial & adjectivel phrases 


I gazed the at little silver car slowly driving down the road. There's no going back now said the little voice inside my head. The pitch blackness was swallowing everything up. My legs were purple and numbing. The door slides open as if we were going into paradise, but it was actually a airport massive and cold.


 My eyes widen when I see the humongous que of people flying Qantas. Then stare at the tiny little line of people flying Jet star and Air New Zealand. There is like no one there. Anyway time ticking. Hopefully there not all on my plane!

At long last the long que was finished. Well for us at lest! We went to a counter with a lady with a big cheesy grin on her face and her beautiful brown hair in a high bun. She scanned our passports then just suddenly stopped, took a glance at Nelson and then that's when the nerves struck me.

 “He's a boy right"? She asked.
 “Yes why"? mum answered.
 “Because it says he's a female”.
“oh my gosh" mum said in shock.
 The lady guided us to the end of the airport terminal and we waited. I was so nervous. Is it me or is it getting hot in here. Thoughts were flying through my mind.  Will they let us out of the country?
 “Calm down" said mum.
  How does she my mum expect me to calm down? I mean seriously. G wiz

 The lady returned.“ so we just rung Canberra, and they said if we let you out of the country to Sydney than they have to let you go out of Sydney from perth".
What a relive. I can't wait to see my dad in Perth. 


My first copy.

I gazed at the car speeding down the road. There's no going back now i thought to myself. The pitch blackness was swallowing everything up. My legs were purple and numb. The door slides open as if we were the royal family.


 My eyes widen when I see the line of people flying Qantas. Then stare at the line of people flying Jet star and Air New Zealand. There is like no one there. Anyway time was getting wasted waiting on this long line.

At last the long Que. was finished. Well for us at lest! They scanned our passports. Then she suddenly stopped, took a glance at Nelson and then that's when the nerves struck me.

 “He's a boy right"? She asked. “Yes why"? mum answered. “Because it says he's a female”. “oh my gosh" mum said in shock. The lady guided us to the end of the cheek out terminal thing and waited. I was so nervous. Is it me or is it getting hot in here. Thoughts were flying through my mind.  Will they let us out of the country? “Calm down" said mum.

 The lady returned.“ so we just rung Canberra and they said if we let you out of the country to Sydney than they have to let you go out of Sydney". What a relive. I can't wait to see my dad in Perth.


How I redrafted it. 



Sunday 9 November 2014

Radio practice reflection

In Nic's reading we have made a radio station called 8001/listen. We went in groups for different things. Georgia,Anna, Aroha, olivia, Emma & I are doing arts. Georgia, Aroha and I did a colouring in compitition.  The girls got elsa and the boys got a super cool race car.